tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post8188375262997343265..comments2024-03-20T14:57:14.094+05:30Comments on Quod Vidi: An Avoidable EndD2http://www.blogger.com/profile/04659198938158373406noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-5314014620803936172011-01-22T02:19:56.883+05:302011-01-22T02:19:56.883+05:30Thank you so much, Sammy. And by the way, you do h...Thank you so much, Sammy. And by the way, you do have the ability. For reference, see your blog. :P<br />And thanks again. :)D2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04659198938158373406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-68575324200888886322011-01-21T18:34:12.478+05:302011-01-21T18:34:12.478+05:30You write excellent poetry is all I can say. The a...You write excellent poetry is all I can say. The ability to weave a story into a poem...is something that I surely do not have.Samadritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06559209065320147413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-53063734242930864942011-01-19T21:18:35.171+05:302011-01-19T21:18:35.171+05:30@Sarah : Positivity would sound good but the reali...@Sarah : Positivity would sound good but the reality is far from what seems to be good.<br />Thank you for the appreciation. :)D2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04659198938158373406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-90511589635956052122011-01-14T16:28:35.028+05:302011-01-14T16:28:35.028+05:30sad. i wished u would have added some element of p...sad. i wished u would have added some element of positivity in the end so that maybe someone reading it would have refrained from such a momentous yet empty thought.<br />but, i would like to add that u have peened it wonderfully from the start till the end!<br /><br />sarahSarah malikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15900352659438484102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-85923548375396268032011-01-13T02:45:10.676+05:302011-01-13T02:45:10.676+05:30@S R Ayyangar : Absolutely. It's just pitiful ...@S R Ayyangar : Absolutely. It's just pitiful how many people don't stop to think about the simplicity of that.<br /><br />@Amropali : I'm glad you liked it. :)D2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04659198938158373406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-33501692881749932672011-01-12T19:56:41.944+05:302011-01-12T19:56:41.944+05:30I like how there is still hope when 'She unscr...I like how there is still hope when 'She unscrewed the lid and yanked it off its base' for it is only in the final line where she 'decided to lay down and die'Amropalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09639390876321920913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-15514649665235969752011-01-12T19:19:18.500+05:302011-01-12T19:19:18.500+05:30Life is to live with positivity even in pain.Life is to live with positivity even in pain.S.R.Ayyangarhttp://srayyangar.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-33659707901297890882011-01-11T13:48:19.503+05:302011-01-11T13:48:19.503+05:30@Mani : That's a nice way to look at it. Howev...@Mani : That's a nice way to look at it. However, it's a 'life and death' matter. Such a decision shouldn't be taken impulsively and they always are. They might miss out on a lot of good things in life. It's their life but it affects a lot of people as well.<br />Thanks, buddy. :)D2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04659198938158373406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-12902220438020198862011-01-11T01:11:46.936+05:302011-01-11T01:11:46.936+05:30I think sometimes if its an individual's life,...I think sometimes if its an individual's life, shouldn't the choice of death be his too?? what do u say ?<br /><br /><br />Btw excellent usage of words, thick and mushy :)Mani Lalwanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07507179660184880239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-32439217057350678352011-01-11T00:34:31.302+05:302011-01-11T00:34:31.302+05:30@Lioness : I'm glad you liked it. I'll wai...@Lioness : I'm glad you liked it. I'll wait for your post to be up, then and in the meantime, i'll be reading up 'Big Blonde'.D2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04659198938158373406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-81297074777130409402011-01-10T22:57:00.900+05:302011-01-10T22:57:00.900+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-57343507758230770802011-01-10T22:24:13.996+05:302011-01-10T22:24:13.996+05:30@Enchanta :
There is no such thing
As simply mere...@Enchanta : <br />There is no such thing<br />As simply mere coincidence.<br />Everything is well connected<br />There is always a reason.<br />In the larger picture, <br />It all makes sense.D2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04659198938158373406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-88964669389996909762011-01-10T22:21:00.444+05:302011-01-10T22:21:00.444+05:30@ D2:
But then a sudden stroke of luck,
Saved a d...@ D2: <br />But then a sudden stroke of luck,<br />Saved a dismal ending,<br />Or was it really luck that held her back,<br />But a prayer unknown, attended?Miss Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02927729551905203727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-27426441945959213402011-01-10T22:03:40.721+05:302011-01-10T22:03:40.721+05:30@Sayak :
And she lost out.
Gave in
To what could h...@Sayak :<br />And she lost out.<br />Gave in<br />To what could have been <br />A new life.D2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04659198938158373406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-507803661972441312011-01-10T20:54:33.802+05:302011-01-10T20:54:33.802+05:30An avoidable end,
Maybe, probably, possibly.
Perha...An avoidable end,<br />Maybe, probably, possibly.<br />Perhaps she could not bend,<br />The dimension of time, the agony it inflicted, daily.<br />Perhaps she was tired;<br />Hence she retired.<br />She desired.<br />Transpired.Sayak Shomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13138862278516673530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-60101850559379917352011-01-10T14:52:46.139+05:302011-01-10T14:52:46.139+05:30@Meher : There is nothing brave about taking a bun...@Meher : There is nothing brave about taking a bunch of pills or cutting yourself up. Pain is a drug too. But facing your problems head first is what takes a great deal of courage.<br />Thanks. :)D2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04659198938158373406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-33691603050457697232011-01-10T14:32:24.074+05:302011-01-10T14:32:24.074+05:30Suicide is often considered a cowardly act. But I ...Suicide is often considered a cowardly act. But I believe, a person who has the guts to inflict pain upon himself that leads to death has to be brave. When a person is suicidal, insanity knows no bounds. Well written. =)Meherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04287357811956681603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-50990372709204739562011-01-10T06:01:52.219+05:302011-01-10T06:01:52.219+05:30The pain is not felt by only one person. It is by ...The pain is not felt by only one person. It is by someone else as well, if not then, then lots later; could even be someone unexpected.D2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04659198938158373406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-22745604426950173722011-01-10T05:54:57.030+05:302011-01-10T05:54:57.030+05:30Oh btw
EXCELLENT poetry!
How vivid! Just by readin...Oh btw<br />EXCELLENT poetry!<br />How vivid! Just by reading it, I could feel the inflicted pain.Miss Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02927729551905203727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-10126234036894201392011-01-10T05:54:14.550+05:302011-01-10T05:54:14.550+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Miss Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02927729551905203727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006583928232255401.post-36672488279611974202011-01-10T05:52:18.030+05:302011-01-10T05:52:18.030+05:30Momentary moments when every sense is lost.
That&...Momentary moments when every sense is lost. <br />That's what is more painful than the real death; for the victim dies alive, right in her conscious self.<br />The action of attempt to suicide is just a mere after-effect.Miss Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02927729551905203727noreply@blogger.com