Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Moments More

'The Kiss' by Gustav Klimt



As the stormy wind settles to a mellow breeze,
Her eyes closed and a peaceful smile is all I see.
And serenity runs through me holding me down.
This is the one person to whom I would bow.

Never nonchalant, always hearing to listen.
And listening to understand, never too frisky.
Moments after the twilight, as her eyes open
And ponder awhile, I stare enchanted, smitten.

Being in love is a wonderful feeling.
As I live through it; she sits beside, gleaming.
The world is her; she is dearest to me.
A day enough to know, a month better to enrich me.

And yet, a month is but a short while, for there is time.
And a lot of it to live and live together in a world of rhymes.
Sharing has never been better, and a love shared has made me stronger.
There will be months; there will be years; there will be moments more.
This love has a long way to go and it shall not endure strongly, but linger fiercely forever.

15 comments:

Enchanta said...

Incomparable poetry,
Incomparable ardor...

and staring into the screen as I read this all over again, all I can comprehend is that I am left dazzled and irrevocably smitten... too.

Enchanta said...

Btw what a BEAUTIFUL portrait!
As always, I am sleeping :P

I love you.

D2 said...

@Enchanta : Voiced my thoughts precisely. Only for me, it's your poetry and more specifically and also broadly, you. I hope the painting depicts us well enough.
All for you, Dimi. I love you. :-)

Meher....all out to explore..!! said...

*Sharing has never been better, and a love shared has made me stronger.
There will be months; there will be years; there will be moments more.
This love has a long way to go and it shall not endure strongly, but linger fiercely forever*

Trust me,these lines are so beautiful..I wish i had written something as awesome as this.

D2 said...

@Meher : Thank you so much. For all I know, you could write something better! :)

Purba said...

Oooh...to be in love!!! All I can do is sigh.

And so happy for you :)

Enchanta said...

For you, of course :-)

Couldn't help but comment again and the above should give you idea enough how affected I am.

D2 said...

@Purba Di : Thank you so much. :D

D2 said...

@Enchanta : :-)

Alka Gurha said...

Brilliant is the word!

D2 said...

Thank you so much, Alka.

Dhupa said...

wow..simply superb...

D2 said...

Thanks a lot, Dhupa. :)

varsha said...

kya baat hai ! Badhaai ho!!

D2 said...

@varsha di : thank you so much. hehe :D

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